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The Moon Hath Soothed by ~amberfoxwing:iconamberfoxwing:





Alone I sit in quiet room,
the darkness waning thin;
the quiet looms,
as death assumes,
decaying all within.

Divining touch, despondant gloom
together shift as one;
away it flies,
that life of lies,
encompassed by the sun.

The sun retreats to later rise,
replaced by Moon of grey:
with loving sighs
constructing lives,
the Moon takes pain away.

She gives forgiveness to those who try,
another chance for life:
the girl who weeps
and never sleeps,
the Moon hath soothed her cries.

Relieving sadness, strife and hurt,
her kindly face smiles down
to kiss the cheek
of Strong or Meek,
to place the rosen crown.

Alone I sat in quiet room,
with darkness waning thin;
but Moon was there
with love to share,
and I began again.
©2005-2009 ~amberfoxwing
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I was bored in English. Tis based around my particular beliefs, mainly reincarnation and the moon goddess being top dog (top bitch? XD). Nope, I'm not suicidal; nope, I'm not depressed! I'm actually quite happy, thankyaverramuch, but we're reading a bit of Emily Dickinson and, well, you understand ^.^

I drew the picture too; it was done in Painter 8 and Photoshop 7. It's part of a comic page that you will likely never see because I more or less hate it. YAY!
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It's beautifully morbid. I like it.

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Yay! *applauds* I haven't written poetry in so long x.X; I'm glad you like ^^

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"Alone I sat in quiet room" - did you purposely leave out the 'a' or 'the'? it just doesn't seem right to me.

I wish i could write like that. But i can't. Cause I suck at english. ~_~

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Hi, I'm Lilly Mosclivich. I don't like you.
I did purposefully leave it out, for meter purposes ^_^ If I had added that extra syllable, it would have taken on a meter that seems to connotate a happier feeling.

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Ohh!

LOVELYNESS

YOU WRITE TEH GREAT.

It makes a loot of sense.

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ah. then go and write like that. ^^;

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Hi, I'm Lilly Mosclivich. I don't like you.
XD I pulled that out of the top of my head from momentary speculation, just so you know ... I don't actually know that much about poetry. X3;;; But I have learned mooch observation type skills.

Y'know what? I'm going to stop rambling and shut up now. ._.;;;

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*squels*

:O!

*gnaws on arm*

xD

OMG OMGOMG

I MISSEESSES YOOU

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Friday night in the Kingdom of Dooooooom.
Very good, but you switch around your rhyme scheme a bit throughout... love the subject matter.
so its you thats been listening at the top of the stairs!

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