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Here's Kami and Kiran in all their markered glory...^_^;; They're sparring and having a conversation at the same time. Since they're warriors, sparring comes naturally to them, and thus they can do this. ^_^ I envy them, don't you?
I realize there are a lot of mistakes in this. Ssshhhhhh.......
I realize there are a lot of mistakes in this. Ssshhhhhh.......
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Well, since you say you know there are lots of mistakes I won't say them....not. (part of being an artist is giving and taking constructive crits, I'm afraid)
I tell you, the look on the guy one the right's (Kiran?) face is great for them having a conversation while they spar (otherwise I would say he should look more like he's concentrating, but under the circumstances, this conveys that they don't have to watch each other's moves like hawks)
Of course Kiran's stance is so not really right for that kick. He looks to be doing a Crane stance with his left leg while he performs a kind of a high kick that's going downward with his right leg: he couldn't get his leg near that height, nor angle, when his other(left) is crouched so low, no matter if he can do the splits or not! And Kami will very much so hurt his ankle (maybe even break) if he holds his body on his foot in that position (his right.)
Since my martial arts knowledge only goes so far **only knows a bit from friends** I shall leave off that mess and continue me comments from more artist perspective.
I like the lines very much, especially in the hair; since they are so sure and pretty looking. But I am afraid I must tell you to learn to draw feet. (don't worry, I'm working on that too. I've got shoes down pat so much I'll never have to worry about that, but I must learn to draw bare feet better.)
Ok, that's enough from me. Feel free to disagree, or agree, whatever!
I tell you, the look on the guy one the right's (Kiran?) face is great for them having a conversation while they spar (otherwise I would say he should look more like he's concentrating, but under the circumstances, this conveys that they don't have to watch each other's moves like hawks)
Of course Kiran's stance is so not really right for that kick. He looks to be doing a Crane stance with his left leg while he performs a kind of a high kick that's going downward with his right leg: he couldn't get his leg near that height, nor angle, when his other(left) is crouched so low, no matter if he can do the splits or not! And Kami will very much so hurt his ankle (maybe even break) if he holds his body on his foot in that position (his right.)
Since my martial arts knowledge only goes so far **only knows a bit from friends** I shall leave off that mess and continue me comments from more artist perspective.
I like the lines very much, especially in the hair; since they are so sure and pretty looking. But I am afraid I must tell you to learn to draw feet. (don't worry, I'm working on that too. I've got shoes down pat so much I'll never have to worry about that, but I must learn to draw bare feet better.)
Ok, that's enough from me. Feel free to disagree, or agree, whatever!